It's good that you are keyframe animating, it takes a lot more effort and patience and generally pays off BUT just now you're lacking the basics, have a look around for any guides on the 12 Basic Principles of Animation and try to practice and learn from them.
You could have tried a bit harder with the message bits, actually design the lettering, lay it out neater and, as someone mentioned before, show it longer. Rather than it just being writing it could add to the overall animation.
recently i have been watching a lot more on animation :P when i made this all i had was a basic grasp of animation, and i knew a little about keyframing :P and next animation i do should come out a lot better :) i'll try adding in some background and maybe music if i can figure it out X) but thatnk you for the help :D
Definitely some of the most professional stuff on this site, it actually looks, sounds and is funny enough to be something I could easily see appearing on an Adult Swim block. Good job, hope to see more.
That was one brilliant. Very cool/stylised animation and the many jokes worked. Not sure about the pretty random mario bros bits, they didn't really have a place in it but apart from that, amazing work!
It just wouldn't be a proper vidyagame internet-cartoon without gratuitous Mario references! (:
That was really good, nice art and overall great bit of work. Really enjoyed your music too definitely added to the experience.
Bee Eee Ay
As in BEAutiful game, really love how its looks the dirty watercolour/ink look is fantastic. The game has a lot of charm to it too.
Good idea, well executed
Good fun and I liked the idea, its a pity I am TERRIBLE at platformers.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.