It's good that you are keyframe animating, it takes a lot more effort and patience and generally pays off BUT just now you're lacking the basics, have a look around for any guides on the 12 Basic Principles of Animation and try to practice and learn from them.
You could have tried a bit harder with the message bits, actually design the lettering, lay it out neater and, as someone mentioned before, show it longer. Rather than it just being writing it could add to the overall animation.
recently i have been watching a lot more on animation :P when i made this all i had was a basic grasp of animation, and i knew a little about keyframing :P and next animation i do should come out a lot better :) i'll try adding in some background and maybe music if i can figure it out X) but thatnk you for the help :D
Definitely some of the most professional stuff on this site, it actually looks, sounds and is funny enough to be something I could easily see appearing on an Adult Swim block. Good job, hope to see more.
That was one brilliant. Very cool/stylised animation and the many jokes worked. Not sure about the pretty random mario bros bits, they didn't really have a place in it but apart from that, amazing work!
It just wouldn't be a proper vidyagame internet-cartoon without gratuitous Mario references! (:
Really funny, great punchline.
Good thing I didn't see the comments first. Don't give it away, folks.
It was faultless really - funny when it was supposed to be, well animated, good voice acting and intriguing story. Looking forward to the next one.
Woah you should get a job with with Aarman Animations with that kind of talent! The patience it must have taken to get it going that slick is incredibly impressive.
Still like these types of animations
Entertaining, has a lot going on could be worth a few rewatches to catch it all. Stared partially out of focus in the middle to get the general mayhem. Good work.
That was fantastic, can't really think of what else to say about it - I'm as confused as I am impressed. Some great silky smooth animation too.
I thought it was going somewhere right up till the lobster bit, it also seems to be where the voice acting faltered - before that it was promising. I think if you'd followed up the sunny bit with something really dry/deadpan it would have worked quite well.
T'was all based on a dream. I didn't consciously write this.
Good job, nice choice of camera angles and pretty well done animation overall considering it was done in 2 weeks.
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