Good-OL-Scotty's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[i miss you!]

Good basics

It's good that you are keyframe animating, it takes a lot more effort and patience and generally pays off BUT just now you're lacking the basics, have a look around for any guides on the 12 Basic Principles of Animation and try to practice and learn from them.

You could have tried a bit harder with the message bits, actually design the lettering, lay it out neater and, as someone mentioned before, show it longer. Rather than it just being writing it could add to the overall animation.

ddavidd356 responds:

recently i have been watching a lot more on animation :P when i made this all i had was a basic grasp of animation, and i knew a little about keyframing :P and next animation i do should come out a lot better :) i'll try adding in some background and maybe music if i can figure it out X) but thatnk you for the help :D

[TmsT's "Spy & Pyro"]

Superb

That was one brilliant. Very cool/stylised animation and the many jokes worked. Not sure about the pretty random mario bros bits, they didn't really have a place in it but apart from that, amazing work!

TmsT responds:

It just wouldn't be a proper vidyagame internet-cartoon without gratuitous Mario references! (:

[Sunny]

Brain Crab

I thought it was going somewhere right up till the lobster bit, it also seems to be where the voice acting faltered - before that it was promising. I think if you'd followed up the sunny bit with something really dry/deadpan it would have worked quite well.

AdamBTrousers responds:

T'was all based on a dream. I didn't consciously write this.

[Demise of a Match]

Heh

Pretty good, liked everything except the voice - it could have been done a bit better.

Wonchop responds:

Heh. I'll fit him with a cockney accent next time XD